Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Letter Critique: Brittany!

I thought that Brittany's letter was really good. I liked how she had Elizabeth address her character flaws by saying that she had a confidence in her ability to judge character. This is something that Elizabeth might not say, but it is definitely something she would feel. I also thought that it was good how Brittany left the ending open so that we could all think about how it might end up. She explains Elizabeth's logic really well. I like the tone she uses because I can picture Elizabeth speaking like that in the book. It was also good how she outlined the progression of Elizabeth's feelings and explained them. Good job (:

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