Letter Critique: Nick!

Nick's letter was really good. It used a lot of words and phrasing that really reminded me of the way that Elizabeth talks. I really liked the way that the letter was straightforward and to the point. That aspect reflected how Elizabeth can be sort of obstinate, which is a different take than many of the other letters showed. I liked that Elizabeth did not accept the proposal outright, but kept the offer open. This made me think about possible endings which is good. It is good that he writes about Elizabeth wanting to further their relationship because that makes the whole situation more positive sounding. The best part of the letter was the way in which Nick was able to incorporate remorse into a matter of fact tone. I likes his letter a lot. Great job ! (: