Letter Critique: Sarah!

Sarah's letter managed to use good language while being clear and to the point which was great! My favorite part was when she described Mr. Darcy by saying that he "oozed pride and superiority" although Elizabeth might not have said it that way, it was great imagery and I liked it a lot! Sarah showed that Elizabeth learned lessons from this whole ordeal by discussing how it will affect her in her life to come. I thought that was great because it is definitely something Elizabeth would have learned from. The section when she describes Elizabeth as being blinded by prejudice is another great descriptive part. All of the descriptions in the letter were great because they made the letter very intriguing! The letter definitely sounded authentic and I like how the ending was a happy one. Great job (: