Letter Critique: MJ!

I really liked the language that Melissa used throughout her letter! I thought it mimicked Elizabeth's really well and could have come right out of the book. I like how Melissa kept saying how she would understand if Darcy did not accept her letter, because it would be understandable if he did not want to. I also liked it because she is asking him to respond to her letter and it leaves the ending of the story open to the imagination. I also like how she is able to empathize with Mr. Darcy and say how she would have done the same thing if she was in his position with Jane. The tone of the letter was also very fitting because it was apologetic and sincere, but not desperate and I believe that this is how Elizabeth would sound. The part when she writes about her heart being heavy was really good because I liked the imagery and emotion that that evokes. Overall I thought this letter was great! (: