Letter Critique: Dasomi!

Dasomi did a great job of beginning the letter with Elizabeth's apology. The way she wrote it made it very sincere and I liked it a lot! There might have been a couple of typos, but the extensive vocabulary more than made up for it. The best part of the letter to me was her emphasis on Jane and Elizabeth's relationship, this definitely sounded like something Elizabeth would say. The description of how bad she felt for Jane made the letter feel all the more authentic. She did a great job of addressing each issue that Mr. Darcy wrote about in his letter. The ending was really good because it showed that Elizabeth did not just expect Darcy to take her back, but was ready to start over with him. Great job (: