Letter Critique: Ceilli!

I really liked Ceilli's letter a lot. It captured the emotional aspect of Elizabeth perfectly! I liked the way she let Mr. Darcy know about how flustered she felt. It was also really good how she ended with extending her hand in friendship rather than just accepting marriage, it was a nice way to sort of decline his offer. it was also cool how she used a question to cause Mr. Darcy to think about his actions, it was an interesting strategy. Ceilli also did a really good job of explaining Elizabeth's thought processes and reasoning, this made the letter sounds pretty real. The word choice of this letter helped me to put myself in Elizabeth's shoes because it depicted a lot about her emotions. Overall I thought this was really good. (: