Letter Critique: QingFei!

I thought that Qingfei's letter was good because it covered all of the topics that Mr. Darcy talked about in his letter. I also like how she had Elizabeth decline his proposal again because that is definitely something that could happen in novel. I also like how she explained why Elizabeth felt the way she did which would definitely help Mr. Darcy to understand her point of view. The words she used were also very descriptive. One critique is that the wording of some sections was a little different than it may have been in the book. I really liked the emphasis she put on Elizabeth's relationship with Jane!I feel like Elizabeth and Jane are very close and so that would be an important aspect of Elizabeth's letter. Overall good job! (: